TrololololoNoob
Fri, Nov 09 '18, 23:49
What Do You Like about Fart Fetish Fiction?
Hey, y’all. I’ve been a ghost around here for a while, and I’ve begun to write some fart fetish short stories. I’d like to learn how better to express what appeals to me about the fetish.

So, if y’all are willing to answer, I’d like to ask precisely what my title suggests to see if you guys can give me a clearer perspective. To those of you who read fart fiction, what do you like about it? What kinds of situations are most appealing, and why? If you’d like to, also tell me what things you don’t like to see in fart fiction. Thanks!
Penchant
Sat, Nov 10 '18, 08:14
Although this isn’t exactly personal preference, I would like to see some more originality in a community that seems to be growing quite quickly nowadays. Things like awknowledging the female fetishists of this community and their tastes, as well as use of our fetish as a symbol or a supportive plot device for an intriguing theme, are stuff I haven’t really seen in this, or any, fetish community.

Most people just devolve their stories around lust, and although that IS the core aspect of all paraphilias, it can be remolded and construed to have a lust-related theme in it, that paints a new or interesting persepctive, like how even in fetish communities there’s discrimination. It still has to do wholly wih fetishes and fetishists, but it moreso a meta-analysis.

TL;DR: Don’t write “farting diaries”. Be creative. Put a spin on it. Be progressive.
mkmd13
Sat, Nov 10 '18, 18:15
What I like most about Fart Fiction that I see anyone rarely do is create "charm" effects with them. So, instead of the farts smelling terrible, the girl will make her farts smell so enticing that her opponent just can't help himself, but to smell them up, basically letting her opponent just beat himself in the battle.

It will be up to her opponent to try and resist her tempting smells and battle not only her, but his own mind as well. I think this adds another element to the story that can make a battle go in many different directions.
mrspeedmon
Sun, Nov 11 '18, 23:57
Personally, and I'm not sure if I'm part of the minority opinion or not, I like the masochist/sadist angle of the genre. Seeing a girl let loose really terrible smelling farts and then seeing the victim cover their nose or tearing up or screaming in pain from the assault on the senses. Although, scat's a little too messy for me so I'm not too into that. And for some reason, I'm not really into the whole body odor thing except for farts.

I suppose that's kind of why I like skunk girls so much. Most artists tend to give them the highest degree of stink that could be possible for farts. Magic also stands out as a neat concept both for the ways of forcing the victim to smell the farts (such as entrapment or sense enhancement) and ways of enhancing the experience whether that's making the farts stinkier, increasing the volume or other ways of making the fart sniffing experience more awful.

Lastly, and this is mostly for artists, butts are nice, especially if they get detailed about it. Seeing an anus swell up and bloom open as a blast of hot stench is released is a major plus for me.
NoMarcy
Mon, Nov 12 '18, 04:25
Slowly Evolving Fetish Details (It's more subtle over time)
I don't know if it's like this for anyone else or not, but for me it's been different the longer I've been around the 'community'. There's that stage where you're kind of off to yourself vs. once you've had the opportunity to socialize online with a bunch of like-minded people. A sort of evolution started.
Our fetishes are all very different but cross the same road at some point: Farts. For my fetish (humiliation, mainly) I get something cool from both the dominant and submissive angles of it. I like that outside position where the humiliating thing is happening to someone you 'care about' or something. Like that unspoken bond you have with a protagonist of a storyline.

This is why it doesn't take a million farts to turn me on like crazy. In fact, the less the better. ONLY BECAUSE... if there are too many, each particular one can start to lose its value. It's the same reason the government can't just print a bunch of money, right? They can't just make new bitcoins online, or else they all lose value slowly. I feel like farts are the same. Especially since I've been on a Realism kick lately. Too many farts can desensitize you to the fact that someone just FARTED ON SOMEBODY ELSE'S FACE! That should be like a really big deal, you know? It sure would be in real life!


PWS and the Brave and Stinker games left an impression on me at first, which I seemed to be fine with while I was making Skunk Amateur Wrestling, but ever since 2016 or so, I've been obsessed with the realistic aspect. Like what would something like PWS be like in real life? One silent fart and the person would be tapping out already! How much does it really take until the humiliation alone makes the decision for you? (That doesn't mean the winner would stop right then or anything of course, lol. It just means the match was won.)

ALL this is why the stinkface style rubbing/grinding inbetween farts is so important to me, the dialogue exchange (including thoughts b/w both characters involved (or all three characters, etc) in the scene), and why it's important to me to find all the different 'edges' to the idea of stink humiliation as it would pertain to real life.

My fetish WASN'T like this back when I started, but it is now. Which means it changed?
I wrote this one two years ago around when my realism ideas started (I couldn't use the realism idea on PWS edits since it would go against PWS' flow), and I STILL haven't stopped feeling this way about realism.

https://www.deviantart.com/nomarcy/art/Captain-Erica-The-Winter-Wrestler-LOL-671317892

It's the end of 2018 now... so I guess my fetish changed altogether? Subtlety is my new obsession. Progressively sharp subtlety to the WHOLE dynamic of this fetish.
NoMarcy
Mon, Nov 12 '18, 04:26
Oh, and thanks Penchant!
Penchant said:
Don’t write “farting diaries”. Be creative. Put a spin on it. Be progressive.


Onara Renaissannnnnce!!
Penchant
Mon, Nov 12 '18, 05:29
Society and Fetishes
I’m going to say this not to offend any party, but as to suggest deeper thought that seems to lack in lust-based places like this. I think people with fetishes, fetishists, have it worse than people who are homosexual or trans. Homosexuals can state that they love the person for being a person, and trans people can state their need for a more fitting identity or to be something for someone else. But fetishists have nothing to say on that note. By definition we love the object, or situation, not the person. We still love them, if we are intimate, but the fetish is more poignant, ingrained.

And when mocked or asked about the fetish, there is no care to how it affects us. Because, as it is attraction to an object, the fetish itself is treated as an object. Maybe other people have worse problems, and they probably do. But, just as for personal experience, when people who know about my fetish jome about it, or ask me how people who have fetishes could be attracted to the object in the way they do, it is a tensor. It feels like there’s no care as to how the fetish is a core part of a person. Kinks are slight fetishes, but they aren’t as personal and are moreso explorative and don’t affect the person as much. Fetishes are an accumulative of experiences that are intense to the person who have them.

So when someone mocks or asks me about mine, I feel like they don’t care enough about me to understand how unique my fetish is to me, that they don’t care enough about me that they want to understand it on their own through trying to relate, even if they can’t. For me, my fetish feels like the only thing that gives me any uniqueness or originality.

Never do I see any stories online completely about themes that recall and relate to what I’ve previously said. It’s sad that the only people who could even understand this fetish I have choose to only use it, and not actually think it over on a more personal scale. Even though many creators all around the web of our fetish have become depressed due to the flake they get from having this.

To sum it up, this community feels like a walk into a private strip-club that is hollow to me.
NoMarcy
Tue, Nov 13 '18, 03:58
Getting In Business
Penchant said:
To sum it up, this community feels like a walk into a private strip-club that is hollow to me.


Might be time to redecorate.
The Renaissance is supposed to apply to everyone~
You ever write any stories? I'm curious about the fetish expression now.
BBWAREBEST
Tue, Nov 13 '18, 22:39
I have come from just liking seeing girls fart, to like girls who enjoy farting and the relief that comes from it.It's a pretty simple and stupid side of the fetish but I have seeing others who think similarly to me so, I guess I am not alone in thinking that women just enjoying the simple act of farting by themselves (sometimes liking even the smell) are hot.Bonus points if they develop a fetish for it, as it can make for some good plot points if used correctly (an example of a story I read somewhere of a queen who secretly liked farting in her private moments, it had some nice developments).

Buildiup is very important, no need to put a fart every other sentence, even if it can be a good way to show how gassy a character is.Writing some small but interesting details is good as well, such as how the farter is feeling while they are farting.There are people who do a good job of showing it,but some just focus on the fart itself or the person on the receiving end, adding some comments from the farter here and there.I barely remember a good farting story where the focus was more on the farters feelings them other things.

It always seems like the farts or the situation are more important,wasting a lot of potential, both for character development and to keep the story going, despite not seeming that important. There is also those who don't express the feelings of the characters as well, using onomatopoeia or vague descriptions to do that which I feel is kinda cheap.
BBWAREBEST
Tue, Nov 13 '18, 22:57
Penchant said:
To sum it up, this community feels like a walk into a private strip-club that is hollow to me.


I came here just because I like seeing or talking about this kinda stuff but I wasn't really expecting to see a comment like this( the whole comment obviously).Made me think about what a really creative story is like. Seriously I can't come up with nothing but lewd and or unoriginal stuff ( at least according to my knowledge)

Did you try writing? Just based on your comments I feel you at least have a decent enough idea of what is a different story.

Edit:Forgot to ask, if the OP has any stories where did you post it?
Penchant
Wed, Nov 14 '18, 04:55
I continually tried writing a year or two ago (non-fetish writing with only one attempt at fetish writing), but stopped. I haven’t tried writing fiction or any critique of reality in what feels like forever. I don’t even know if I ever was good at it, because writing was something I rarely did just cause I was so lazy.
BBWAREBEST
Thu, Nov 15 '18, 03:23
to penchant
Well I can kinda of understand it really.I have never tried writing "seriously", nor have I tried writing fetish stuff. The most I've made was some notes or google docs but never gave it my all because I always though that it was cringe or I tried to create something big but it never really felt like it would catch other peoples interest. Your previous comment made me realize that the fetish could be explored in different ways them just "and they did lewd fetish-y stuff the end", and I thank you for it at least.
Penchant
Fri, Nov 16 '18, 03:02
Aw,

You poke my hart
NoMarcy
Sat, Nov 17 '18, 22:55
Penchant and BBWAREBEST
Storywriting has way too much pressure on it the way people often perceive it.
If either of you two really want to get into storywriting, you have to simplify what you're trying to do. This is where an outline comes in, like we used to do in school. There has to be a POINT. (I wish I was knew this stuff back when I was making Skunk Amateur, lol)

ALL you have to do is figure out WHAT you have to do, and HOW you want to do it.

Brief EXAMPLE
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BBWAREBEST
"I want to write a cool onara story that doesn't read like a cheap porno."

^^ WRONG ^^ (too general and unfocused, you'll fold from writer's block and laziness/intimidation of your own project, like I did for the majority of 2016-2018)

BBWAREBEST
"I want to write a short onara story that somehow covers the feelings of the farter and person being farted on (in a way I personally have never seen.)"

^^ GOOD JOB! ^^ Now you have a set goal. Once that goal is accomplished your story is finished.

1. What characters are involved/how many needed to accomplish my GOAL ^?
2. Where does it take place? (Anywhere that works for that GOAL ^, focus answers on the GOAL ^)
3. Brainstorm for a way to very briefly identify the characters at the beginning since you made them up yourself and the reader needs to know what makes them human/real/necessary/interesting/matter whatsoever.
4. Are there any concepts or interesting points that need to be established about the characters BEFORE THE ONARA ACTION STARTS (Character defining comments, actions, references, OUTFITS, IDEALS)?

Once you have a clearer picture, the story writes itself.

OMG I don't mean to sound like a broken record, but I refer you to captain erica again... (picture is age locked, but it's just a picture of a log cabin and the title. The story is in the description)

https://www.deviantart.com/nomarcy/art/Captain-Erica-The-Winter-Wrestler-LOL-671317892

Notice how in the story, I had to establish WHERE Erica got the idea to do a stinkface in the first place (where would a realistic everyday person get that idea?).
What kind of person she was, so that in a story set in real life, the reader probably ran into a few people like her before. Easier to identify in a way we usually don't?
BBWAREBEST
Sun, Nov 18 '18, 05:05
Thanks NoMarcy, you hit the nail in the head. Or at least most of it. A lot of my problems with writing come from me losing the focus of the things I wanted to do WITH that specific story, and I often mix things and them give up in the end. I will try to work on that.

I don't think the OP has these issues but his question kinda of touches on this topic, and also what perchant said about trying to be more creative and using other themes besides lust as a base for the story is something very good to keep in mind. He's comment about being mocked for having a fetish sparked a different view on these things for me, kinda wanted to write a story with this theme if possible).Hope we didn't derail the thread too much.
Penchant
Sun, Nov 18 '18, 05:52
I’m Jealous of NoMarcy’s Better Education
I wish I’d learned the organizational techniques they did. Would’ve saved me embarrassment and time.

Anyways, here’s how I organize my outline.

Subject: The general thing I’m focusing on for a theme. (Like the relationship between government and censorship in Fahrenheit 451. Opinion isn’t added here yet.)

Theme(s): A certain opinion or opinions I have on the subject. (Like how when government censors people’s knowledge then life loses meaning for everyday citizens, in Fahrenheit 451. You can have multiple themes, so long as they don’t conflict, but only have one subject. The theme is an opinion of the author on that subject.)

Characters: What NECESSARY characters are required to exist to sufficiently present the theme? (Fahrenheit 451 presents characters that change due to the theme, characters that hint at theme, characters that are blind to the theme, characters that knew about the theme before it was prevalent, and characters that know of the theme but are ignorant.)

Motifs: Actions by characters, events, or symbols/personifications used to demonstrate characterization or the validity of the theme. (In Fahrenheit 451, the nuke. Read the book.)

After that I come up with and scribble down ideas for the story. Well, I used to at least.
NoMarcy
Sun, Nov 18 '18, 06:27
The Practical and Special Nature of Fetish Material
@BBWAREBEST, Don't feel weird about that at all. That losing focus thing is something we both know VERY well, kindred spirit. Soooo many of my own projects including the one I'm on now have fallen victim to it, it can be very frustrating.
If the thread gets too derailed, we can start a new one lol~.

@Penchant, Your education looks spot-on to me! Look at this organization! Fahrenheit 451 sounds like an interesting book... and movie (loooove that smexy Michael B. Jordan). And I'm SO GLAD YOU'RE WATCHING MOVIES, because they can be great for brainstorming original project ideas.

You covered something here that I almost forgot about. MOTIVATIONS. omg, WHY the characters are doing what they're doing, even for short stories under 400 words can make a WORLD of difference. JUST the right comment at any point in the scene/story can greatly extend the life of the project past its first viewing.

Life of a project? What we do as fartists will always be very different than what regular artists do. Writing a story is one thing, even with videogames, sometimes you play them twice but you eventually move on. With fetish material, you're constantly re-viewing it when you're having a 'ahem'... session, you know. Which means stories (or favorite parts of) are read over and over. I never came back to Batman: Arkham Knight after I finished it, but I've watched PWS scenes over and over and over through the years. Ever think about that, guys? Same goes for Brave and Stinker, etc.

NO PRESSURE, but what we make has a different life than non-fetish related work. So take that excitement into account when you're realizing those GOALs/themes ^. Have any stories you find yourself going back to over and over again (I don't mean always re-reading, I mean THINKING of, while in 'session' lol).
Penchant
Sun, Nov 18 '18, 16:34
I Actually Read Fahrenheit But Okay
Yeah, I have the book in my room from when my freshman class read it in English.

Here I’m going to post tips on how to write dialogue that sound realistic, but is still enjoyable.

1. Make it as short as coherently possible. Less can be more. By making, say, a husband speak few words to his wife, you can hint at some marital discord.

2. Don’t have them use fancy words unless they are thinking about how to word what they want to say or they’re trying to convey something that will stick to other characters. A good use of spicing up their vocabulary is to use it to hide the actual theme of your subject in the dialogue.

3. When a character enters a dialogue they are doing so because they want something; they have an agenda. It can be simply to socialize, or to learn information, or to show some superiority as the main characters in There Will Be Blood do by using dialogue to show control.

4. Don’t use dashes or elipses (-, ..., respectively) too much. In dialogue or in narrative. J. K. Rowling used WAY too many dashes, to the point where I was confused for half the time.

5. Keeping #4 in mind, give the characters interesting diction or grammar to show when THEY are speaking. But only hint at this, as doing it too much would result in you putting more focus on how dialogue is conveyed l, instead of the dialogue content itself. If a character is quiet or stutters or something like that, say so outside the dialogue in the same paragraph.

6. Characters should be doing somehing while they are talking. Normal people don’t just walk up to each other and only talk. They fiddle with their own body like picking off lint or curling hair or making subtle movements with their hands; they do something. You want this because it makes them look real and human, and when you do have characters who are only talking, it is typically something very important. When parents go to talk their children about the birds and bees, they don’t do while their cooking.

7. Slang. Its best used in dialogue, so don’t try to use it in narrative unless its first-person and an opinion of a character (admittedly it can be used for humor or some dramatic irony between characters.) However you should use it sparingly, unless your conveying people who aren’t as classy, or who aren’t so intelligent. In Bojack Horseman, the use of the word “fuck” is so rare and signifying of an important event, that fans have made videos titled, “Bojack Horseman Seasons 1-5 - Every ‘Fuck’ Moment”.

8. Don’t aspire for perfect dialogue. You don’t have to follow ANY of these tips (including this one, and a few you really should.) You’re the writer, the author, the creator. If you truly think that you are good at writing then you should trust your instincts. Just don’t get ignorant okay.
NoMarcy
Sun, Nov 18 '18, 19:00
Where I probably got most of my unspoken dialogue rules
Penchant said:
Here I’m going to post tips on how to write dialogue that sound realistic, but is still enjoyable.


LOL, I don't know why I said WATCHED the movie. Right, you read the book.

Even if we were working with Fantasy based characters, I took drama classes in high school, my go-to is always to pretend as if I were them (their comprehensive personality) and deliver the lines myself IN SCENE. Eventually it's second nature.

With an exception of tips #4/5 and #7^ since I feel like I use a lot of ellipses and have known people in real life that use fuck way more than necessary, the initial inspiration behind these rules feels inherent if you're REALLY really pretending to be them in the scene.

Watching movies also helps now that I think about it. Shows too. Ones with realistic character types and line deliveries which is like SOOO many shows.
It leaves an unspoken impression in your mind over so many years.
stellarcircle5
Thu, Nov 29 '18, 21:46
I'll tell you what I like about fart stories verse the actual pics. My mind is free to create and imagine what's taking place in the story while a pic, for me, has it's limits since the imagine is already there. Most I can do is imagine what happens after the pic and only stuff related to the pic, if that makes sense.

Stories give me an idea what the author thinks, feels, and acts on the subject they're writing about. I think it's cool cause I get to learn about them and how much they care about the subject. Cause I'll tell ya this, lately, I've been curious on other people's stance on the fetish of flatulence. I wonder how much detail, how much info are they willing to put to show their audience how much it means to them, does that make sense?

I'm also a writer myself, I'd say I put plenty of detail into the matter since I care about flatulence so much ya know? So yeah, I like stories more than pics.
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